This is Part 1 of 2.
-BSN

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I could have done without the mind break and the ugly orcs. I would have prefered if she had slaughtered them all.

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I normally like this guy's art...

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Cute character, too bad the story goes into some weird directions.

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Thanks for the TL

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Part 1 of 2 as in you'll translate the missing lines later ?

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As in I will translate the next part. Theyre not really missing, most of those are sound effects and I don't do those.
-BSN

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@inferno555, not much for mindbreak myself, but without the mindbreak, this story would have consisted entirely of her being given a sword killing orcs then going home.

@Imercenary, you didn't read what I wrote, or at least you didn't read it correctly, I didn't say anything about her being raped, the point was in reply to the comment "I could have done without the mind break and the ugly orcs. I would have prefered if she had slaughtered them all." to which I said without that it would just be her killing orcs, no rape was mentioned. Her killing the orcs after being raped would have been preferable to me tbh as I said I am not into mindbreak.

Last edited on 29 July 2015, 08:23.

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Point taken. Okay after they raped her she could have kiiled them all. I would prefer after a person does this kind of stuff to a girl that they get payback in some form or another. That hardly ever happens. The girl somehow falls for the ones who do it no matter how disgusting or vile they are

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@ Mrsuperhappy

How is that a bad thing? "Girl gets raped, girl gets revenge, the end-stay tuned for episode 2, girl gets raped by someone else."

Not every story needed to end with "girl becomes mind broken sex slave, the end-stay tuned for... oh wait there is no sequel because shes a mind broken sex slave now."

I'm in the school of thinking-'its hentai, shut up and enjoy it', but when if an idea can make the hentai BETTER, I'm all for it.

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We need more translated Shimanto Youta

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@tanetus
Part 2 here: https://web.heart123.cloudns.org/g/816499/78126f8959/

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