So, mr commissioner came back and asked me to work more on Samus Aran <3

Part 2 is here ! And you can buy it now on my shop, with a dscount with part 1 : https://orionart1991.itch.io/samus-suit-2
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EDIT 15/11/2025 : Made some text improvements (readability & some words were cut off).
EDIT 25/11/2025 : Improved more text overall (and uploaded a new image)
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All my links : https://orionart.carrd.co/

Eager to see more

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If you are going to charge money then you should invest in basic proofreading. While there are no typos, grammar issues or other writing issues, the typesetting is a disaster.

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Posted on 13 November 2025, 10:54 by: onenightes PM
If you are going to charge money then you should invest in basic proofreading. While there are no typos, grammar issues or other writing issues, the typesetting is a disaster.
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Good call ! The 1st part (made in 2024), had some really bad formatting in page 2 & 6. I just improved those :). However, the text tools of the program I am using (an old Clip Studio Paint version), are very limited. For ex I don't have the "text-justify" option (to have nice blocks of texts). And the word wrapping doesn't keep the words complete but cut them XD. So I got a lot of manual correction to make.
I'm considering buying a new version but I really don't like the commercial model of CSP...

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